Some people just need a high-five.
That's what I decide.
When I leave the room of my last final,
Or I get the job I have been pining after,
I deserve a high five.
At the very least, I deserve a "well done."
Some recognition of my success, I suppose.
When I'm meant to remain humble
And brush off my achievements,
I just want someone to acknowledge that they exist.
I want someone to watch me for the little things—
For the conversation I initiated,
For remembering that little tidbit that you thought everyone had
Forgotten by now,
For each time I make you smile.
All I ask for is a smile in return.
A pat on the back, a hug, or
A grin in return, if the other options are too much.
I'm not being fussy here.
Give me a high-five.
After all, I'm still here.
Still living, surviving, and that
Is incredible.
I'm proud of you, you know.
I don't say it enough.
But I am.
Every time you remember to eat three meals,
To shower, to say your "thank yous".
I want you to know I'm proud of you.
I want to give you a high-five.
Is that weird? Too weird?
I wish it wasn't.
I'd give you a high-five right now.
Or a pat on the back.
Or a hug, if you'd like.
Do you think everyone should get a high-five?
Excluding the monsters, of course.
I think everyone needs one.
Will you return the favor? Give me a high-five?
Or will you leave me hanging?
— Carolina Mendes
I was asked to use the prompt "some people just need a high-five" in my writing club the other day, and while I'd actually liked what I'd written, I didn't wind up reading it aloud. This is my punishment, I suppose. Instead of reading it in a group of ten people, I'm posting it online for the world to see. The written word often makes more of an impact than the spoken one anyway.