This is a poem that I am currently working on. Please tell me what you think. Be as critical as you want. I want criticism to see what I should do to make this poem better. Also if anyone has a title suggestion, that would be appreciated.
Why did this happen to us?
Our life was perfectly fine back then.
Why did you go away?
I thought that everything was great;
I knew we would be together forever.
Why did this happen to us?
We had to do the challenges,
but we passed those easy. So
why did you go away?
You were the golden girl
and I was your best friend.
Why did this happen to us?
I now know that things were hard for you;
But I would’ve helped you
Why did you go away?
I found you though, you could hide from me
I just want to know
Why did this happen to us?
Why did you go away?