I'm Sick of Jealous Females | The Odyssey Online
Start writing a post

I'm Tired Of Jealous Females In Fiction

Why I can't stand jealous fictional girls and how they hurt a story.

103
I'm Tired Of Jealous Females In Fiction

We're all familiar with tropes in fiction. Whether it's through movies, books or TV shows, we've all been exposed to tropes. Love triangles, damsel in distress, the fish out of water, these are all concepts we've seen.

Most of the time when we talk about tropes, we refer to them as a bad thing. And yes, while there are some tropes I wish would die in a pit of fire, there are good ones too. For example, I'm a sucker for the friends to lovers trope.

But I'm not here to talk about the good ones. Recently, there's been a particular trope that's really been bothering me: the jealous female.

Quick disclaimer: I'm not saying characters aren't allowed to be jealous. It's a perfectly normal human emotion that we all feel from time to time, and learning a healthy way to deal with it is an amazing thing we should see more of. What I'm talking about is the "crazy jealous female character," who seems to get jealous, usually of another girl, and takes it way too far.

We've all seen at least one teen movie with this type of character. It's usually the pretty popular girl that gets jealous of another girl (bonus points if she's the new girl), and acts out against said girl. What's wrong with this set up is that the jealous popular girl isn't given any depth what so ever, she's just jealous and mean for the sake of being mean. If we actually got a glimpse into this girl's head, understand why she's acting the way she is, then we would get a three dimensional character, rather than just a copy and paste "mean girl" that makes it feel like the writers were being lazy.

What's even worse is when there's jealousy between two friends. There are very few stories where the main relationship is a platonic love between two women, and nothing's worse than that getting ruined by jealousy, especially over a man. I most recently saw this in the book "Unhooked" by Lisa Maxwell (spoilers ahead).

The book starts with Gwen and her best friend Olivia being stolen away to a dark twisted version of Never land. Based on that description alone I thought the book was gonna be about two best friends teaming up and fighting to get back home. Well, I was greatly misled. Gwen and Olivia are separated for at least half the book to give more room for Gwen to bond with sexy Captain Hook (who's name is actually Rowan). There's also a love "square" I guess since Pan kind of has a thing for Gwen and Olivia falls under a spell and things she's in love with Pan.

Part of Never land's magic is that is causes you to start to forget your past. Gwen starts to even forget Olivia for a bit, and it's only because of her fey blood she's able to fight it. Olivia, however, spends most of the book being charmed and manipulated by Pan, so instead of being Gwen's friend, Olivia is instead jealous of Gwen and now sees her friend as a threat. While it's not entirely Olivia's fault, it still really irritated me.

At the end of the book, Olivia seems to snap out of it after Pan is killed by an evil fairy queen (long story) and sacrifices herself so Gwen and Sexy Hook can get out of Never land. It's clear this is supposed to be an emotional moment, but to be honest I felt nothing other than disappointment.

We're supposed to believe that Olivia is sacrificing herself for her friend, but I never actually believed they were friends. We're told throughout the whole book how close they are but we're never really shown it. And it's not even really that clear if Olivia was doing if for Gwen, or to avenge Pan, so the sacrifice isn't even that powerful.

I think it would have been better if Sexy Hook sacrificed himself and Olivia made it home with Gwen. Then the book would have gotten a 3/5 stars from me rather than a 2/5.

Having a jealous female is old and frankly weakens the story. Not only is it a sign of lazy writing, it's just tiring to constantly see females at each other's throats over petty things rather than forming strong, healthy relationships with each other.

Report this Content
This article has not been reviewed by Odyssey HQ and solely reflects the ideas and opinions of the creator.
ross geller
YouTube

As college students, we are all familiar with the horror show that is course registration week. Whether you are an incoming freshman or selecting classes for your last semester, I am certain that you can relate to how traumatic this can be.

1. When course schedules are released and you have a conflict between two required classes.

Bonus points if it is more than two.

Keep Reading...Show less
friends

Whether you're commuting or dorming, your first year of college is a huge adjustment. The transition from living with parents to being on my own was an experience I couldn't have even imagined- both a good and a bad thing. Here's a personal archive of a few of the things I learned after going away for the first time.

Keep Reading...Show less
Featured

Economic Benefits of Higher Wages

Nobody deserves to be living in poverty.

300516
Illistrated image of people crowded with banners to support a cause
StableDiffusion

Raising the minimum wage to a livable wage would not only benefit workers and their families, it would also have positive impacts on the economy and society. Studies have shown that by increasing the minimum wage, poverty and inequality can be reduced by enabling workers to meet their basic needs and reducing income disparities.

I come from a low-income family. A family, like many others in the United States, which has lived paycheck to paycheck. My family and other families in my community have been trying to make ends meet by living on the minimum wage. We are proof that it doesn't work.

Keep Reading...Show less
blank paper
Allena Tapia

As an English Major in college, I have a lot of writing and especially creative writing pieces that I work on throughout the semester and sometimes, I'll find it hard to get the motivation to type a few pages and the thought process that goes behind it. These are eleven thoughts that I have as a writer while writing my stories.

Keep Reading...Show less
April Ludgate

Every college student knows and understands the struggle of forcing themselves to continue to care about school. Between the piles of homework, the hours of studying and the painfully long lectures, the desire to dropout is something that is constantly weighing on each and every one of us, but the glimmer of hope at the end of the tunnel helps to keep us motivated. While we are somehow managing to stay enrolled and (semi) alert, that does not mean that our inner-demons aren't telling us otherwise, and who is better to explain inner-demons than the beloved April Ludgate herself? Because of her dark-spirit and lack of filter, April has successfully been able to describe the emotional roller-coaster that is college on at least 13 different occasions and here they are.

Keep Reading...Show less

Subscribe to Our Newsletter

Facebook Comments