I wrote this poem a while ago and I really like it. Tell me of any feedback or criticism that you have. I hope that you enjoy it.
Why God?
Why did all this happen to me?
My life was perfectly fine back then
We had everything…well almost everything
We had us and we had love
But then you just took it from us like it was nothing
We were happy and content and had so much going for us
Why? Why did you take him from us God?
He was so full of life and still had so much potential
He shouldn’t have been taken
We all spent months knowing that he was going to be taken
But it never seems real till it actually happens
Nothing seemed real till I was woken up at two am
I knew right away when I saw Mom crying
and instead of crying I comforted her
I always knew that one day he would leave us
But…why God?
Why him? Why me? Why put us through that pain?
Supposedly pain makes people stronger
But for months I was on the verge of tears
I was almost afraid to even be happy
Why did you take him from us?
We lost a son, husband, father, friend and loved one that day
Why did he leave before I really knew him?
God why did you have to take him early
He could’ve lived for longer
But I guess you did give him a long time as it was
But I thought that he would always be with me
So just why did you do it?
I want to know