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My Favorite Poem (So Far)

An Original Poem.

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My Favorite Poem (So Far)
Lunas Grimoire

I wrote this poem a while ago and I really like it. Tell me of any feedback or criticism that you have. I hope that you enjoy it.


Why God?

Why did all this happen to me?

My life was perfectly fine back then

We had everything…well almost everything

We had us and we had love

But then you just took it from us like it was nothing

We were happy and content and had so much going for us

Why? Why did you take him from us God?

He was so full of life and still had so much potential

He shouldn’t have been taken

We all spent months knowing that he was going to be taken

But it never seems real till it actually happens

Nothing seemed real till I was woken up at two am

I knew right away when I saw Mom crying

and instead of crying I comforted her

I always knew that one day he would leave us

But…why God?

Why him? Why me? Why put us through that pain?

Supposedly pain makes people stronger

But for months I was on the verge of tears

I was almost afraid to even be happy

Why did you take him from us?

We lost a son, husband, father, friend and loved one that day

Why did he leave before I really knew him?

God why did you have to take him early

He could’ve lived for longer

But I guess you did give him a long time as it was

But I thought that he would always be with me

So just why did you do it?

I want to know

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