If I Were An Elder | The Odyssey Online
Start writing a post
Politics and Activism

If I Were An Elder

A poem by Modjina Ovil

14
If I Were An Elder
Pixabay.com

Wouldn’t you like to be an elder?

I envision of how it would be

To look on past experiences,

And see where life has taken me


To be among those of the wise

Share my wisdom with you,

Knowing what I’ve been through

And sharing how I’ve made it out


To one day see,

My reflection in a mirror

And while admiring who I’ve become...

To gaze back and see a younger me


I wouldn’t want to be prideful

But to remain humble

Warm and gentle to the touch,

Little ole me will stay the same


Yes, to be an elder

And make fun of the good ole days...

To reminisce with those who’ve stayed

And haven’t passed away


Yes, to be an elder

And drink earl grey tea...

With Haitian bread

I don’t think I’ll drink coffee


To advise the youth

And sing in the church choir

And wear my mother’s hat…

That I’ve already began to do,

Because it isn’t when you lead a ministry,

To then appear all modesty


To be an elder must be really cool...

You get to see your children succeed

By succeed, I mean to make babies

Grandchildren are the best,

They bring excitement and joy...

Feed us til we’re fat


My husband, we’ll meet at a karaoke place...

I’ll be singing to some tune

He’ll be that brave man who runs up,

And yell out, boo


But I’ll be that strong woman that I am

And won’t stop till my song ends...

And he’ll see that I’m brave

And will take me by the hands


We’ll finish the song together

And we’ll call it our own

Now everyone will boo us both


My husband, the soldier,

Will admire my ways

He’ll smile and think I’m the greatest

We’ll share wonderful days


That may not be my story

And I may not marry a solider

That won’t stop me from being,

A great elder


Yes, to be an elder

I can only imagine...

How wonderful to sit back

In my ranch and watch the sunset,

In my rocking chair


To think of how my grandchildren...

Do not call me enough

And yell at their parents

For not disciplining them


Inviting the neighbors for dinner

And talk about good ole television

The ones that I like to watch now...

Or should I say last year

Since college takes up all of my time

Now, my mind doesn’t seem so clear


I wouldn’t feel embarrassed

About the wrinkles

Nor the grey hairs...

Not even for the stretched ears


I’ll love to be an elder,

There’s more to it than what I’ve mentioned

The elder are awesome...

There’s a lot to learn from them,

I hope to aspire to be a great one


This is my most recent poem that I have been writing for a few days and was not intended to offend anyone. I have always picture myself as an elder woman and wondered what it would feel like to literally look back at life and remember all that I can. This poem was written for humor, enjoyment and from personal persepective.



Report this Content
This article has not been reviewed by Odyssey HQ and solely reflects the ideas and opinions of the creator.
friends

Here you will find a list of many of the people you will come across in your life, and if you're lucky, you'll be able to give a name to all these characters that you hopefully see day to day. Don't take these friends for granted because they all add a little something to your life, and if you can't name all of them to your personal friends, chances are it might be you...

Keep Reading...Show less
gossip girl

On the Upper East Side, Blair Waldorf is an icon. She's what every girl aspires to be. She's beautiful, confident, and can handle any obstacle that life throws at her. Sure, she may just be a television character. But for me, she's a role model and theres a lot that can be learned from Queen B.

Keep Reading...Show less
Lifestyle

The Perks of Being a Girl

“I just want you to know that you’re very special… and the only reason I’m telling you is that I don’t know if anyone else ever has.”

1026
girl

As frustrating and annoying as it can be, being a girl is really awesome. We are beautiful inside and out. Not a lot of people may see that, but girls have a ton of amazing qualities.

We have unique flirting skills.

Us girls have a significant way to flirt with other people. Even when we say the most random or awkward things, we have a way of making everything sound cute and planned. It’s just a gift; we’re good like that.

Keep Reading...Show less
gossip girl

Us college students know all about the struggle of spending the day in the library. Whether you are writing a ten-page paper, studying for a biology exam, or struggling through math homework, you somehow find the strength to get to the library to get it all done. Let's just say you have a lot of different thoughts that run through your head during the many hours you spend in the lovely library.

Keep Reading...Show less
female tv characters
We Heart It

Over the past decade, television has undergone a very crucial transition: the incorporation of female lead characters. Since it's a known fact that girls actually do run the world (Beyonce said so herself), it's time for the leading ladies of the small screen to get some credit. Without these characters, women would still be sitting in the background of our favorite shows. These women are not only trailblazers for female empowerment, but role models for women worldwide. With that, here are 15 of the smartest, sassiest ladies gracing our screens that remind us that women do, indeed, rule:

Keep Reading...Show less

Subscribe to Our Newsletter

Facebook Comments