5 + 7 + 5 Of The Best Haiku Out There | The Odyssey Online
Start writing a post
Entertainment

5 + 7 + 5 Of The Best Haiku Out There

17 in total, so you don't have to math.

2177
5 + 7 + 5 Of The Best Haiku Out There
Pexels

A haiku is an "unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines containing usually five, seven, and five syllables respectively ", but a lot of really good ones deviate from this form.

I love this form of expression; I think it's super witty and concise, but still really meaningful. Some of them have an intense message and others describe a fleeting feeling you might have when making coffee.

On a lot of databases they are categorized by emotion, so sometimes instead of listening to happy songs when I'm happy, or sad songs when I'm sad (or the reverse), I find myself browsing through haiku. Here are 5 + 7 + 5, which equals 17 of my favorites!

1. subway station

subway station

ads as only light

the day after the bombs

by Bill Bilquin - Bruxelles, Belgium

2. snowy morn

snowy morn--

pouring another cup

of black coffee

by Odd G. Aksnes, Norway

3. another year

another year—

those crossed out names

in my address book

by Sondra Byrnes - Sant-Fe, New Mexico, USA

4. rainy New York

rainy New York

from the tenth storey window

black umbrellas bloom

by Hortensia Anderson - New-York City, NY, USA

5. crust of bread

crust of bread

in a puddle

homeless fishing

by Brando Altemps - Torino, Italy

6. in a shoebox

in a shoebox

all the candles

of uncelebrated birthdays

by Peter Lindsey - Barcelona, Spain

7. old park bench

old park bench

i touch our initials

each time i pass

by Owen Burkhart - Dyer, Indiana, USA

8. white clouds

white clouds

glide safely

over mine fields

by Barbara Campitelli - Foster City, California, USA

9. food channel

food channel

between commercials

dinner burns

by ash of moth - Columbia, Maryland, USA

10. In the trench

In the trench

of the world war

grows high grass

by Paul Anthony - Loughborough, UK

11. another

another

explosion

in baghdad

spring sun

by Odd G. Aksnes, Norway

12. traffic jam

traffic jam -

Moon passes through

the Earth's shadow

by Israel Balan - Mexico-City, Mexico

13. airport window

airport window--

the cloud of my breath

as your plane reaches the clouds

by ash of moth - Columbia, Maryland, USA

14. labor day

labor day-

i dust of

my resume

ash of moth - Columbia, Maryland, USA

15. bedtime

bedtime --

trying not to count

maimed solders

by bmm - Oregon, USA

16. despite my assurances

despite my assurances

my wife's makeup

thicker

by Peter Brady - Gatineau, Québec, Canada

17. senior's home

senior's home

we celebrate the new year

a 7:00 pm

by Dahl DeVar - Magrath, Alberta, Canada

Report this Content
This article has not been reviewed by Odyssey HQ and solely reflects the ideas and opinions of the creator.
Adulting

18 Things I Want To Do Now That I'm 18

I'm technically an adult, so I'm legally required to live a little, right?

220
Happy Birthday Cake

For the entirety of my high school career, I was always seen as the goody-two-shoes. I never got in trouble with a teacher, I kept stellar grades, and when I wasn't doing extracurricular activities, I was at home studying. Even when I did go out, it was usually with a bunch of fellow band geeks. The night would end before 11:00 PM and the only controversial activity would be a fight based on who unfairly won a round of Apples-to-Apples when someone else clearly had a better card (I promise I'm not still holding a grudge).

Now that I'm officially an adult, I want to pursue some new things. I want to experience life in a way that I never allowed myself to do prior to entering college. These are the years that I'm supposed to embark on a journey of self-discovery, so what better way to do that than to create a bucket list?

Keep Reading...Show less
Featured

10 Life Lessons from Christmas Classics

The holiday classics that shaped my life

105
10 Life Lessons from Christmas Classics
Flickr

The holiday season is full of stress, debt, and forced conversation. While we rush through the month of December, it's important to take a step back and enjoy the moments before they're gone. Most families love to watch Christmas movies, but these beloved films provide more than entertainment. Here are 10 life lessons that I've learned from the holiday classics we watch every year.

Keep Reading...Show less
Featured

15 Mind-Bending Riddles

Hopefully they will make you laugh.

198883
 Ilistrated image of the planet and images of questions
StableDiffusion

I've been super busy lately with school work, studying, etc. Besides the fact that I do nothing but AP chemistry and AP economics, I constantly think of stupid questions that are almost impossible to answer. So, maybe you could answer them for me, and if not then we can both wonder what the answers to these 15 questions could be.

Keep Reading...Show less
Entertainment

Most Epic Aurora Borealis Photos: October 2024

As if May wasn't enough, a truly spectacular Northern Lights show lit up the sky on Oct. 10, 2024

20083
stunning aurora borealis display over a forest of trees and lake
StableDiffusion

From sea to shining sea, the United States was uniquely positioned for an incredible Aurora Borealis display on Thursday, Oct. 10, 2024, going into Friday, Oct. 11.

It was the second time this year after an historic geomagnetic storm in May 2024. Those Northern Lights were visible in Europe and North America, just like this latest rendition.

Keep Reading...Show less
 silhouette of a woman on the beach at sunrise
StableDiffusion

Content warning: This article contains descriptions of suicide/suicidal thoughts.

When you are feeling down, please know that there are many reasons to keep living.

Keep Reading...Show less

Subscribe to Our Newsletter

Facebook Comments